Tuesday, November 14, 2017

1. English journal story - le 17 novembre

Rubric – My English DOJO story
            Due November 17th

£  shows a clear sense of audience; chooses ideas and details to engage the reader’s attention and create an emotional impact (try to make Madame laugh, cry, chuckle, shudder, smile, wince, or snort…)
£ language is clear and varied; experiments with expressive language to create images (sometimes you use triple scoop words).
£  beginning effectively introduces the main characters; engaging
£ develops logically (this happened, and then this happened, and then this happened – the things that happen in my story make sense and Mme can follow the story without getting confused).
£ ending ties up the story and solves the problem (the elephant dung)
£ characters are unique
£ dialogue is clear and contributes to understanding the characters
£ most words are spelled correctly


  1. https://cheezburger.com/8488077312/video-games-mine
    its a link

  2. https://ninjagordinho.tumblr.com/post/130890128018/super-mario-world - this is a second link